Emilia, you have a good writing style and achieve P1 – illustrate the stages of a project lifecycle well. You have a good writing style and have demonstrated a sound knowledge and understanding of this first part of the unit. You have also created a good first impression academically and I’m looking forward to seeing future work from you. Well done.
Emilia Holmes 
Emilia, you have a good writing style and achieve P1 – illustrate the stages of a project lifecycle well. You have a good writing style and have demonstrated a sound knowledge and understanding of this first part of the unit. You have also created a good first impression academically and I’m looking forward to seeing future work from you. Well done.